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My journey in real estate began long before I officially became an agent. For 32 years, I lived in Illinois, where I invested in personal properties during a time when home flipping was a viable opportunity. Later, I moved to Las Vegas, NV, and worked as a real estate agent with Century 21 Gavish Real Estate. However, seeking a place that truly felt like home, my family and I relocated to a suburb of Nashville, Tennessee, to be closer to loved ones.
Now, I am rebuilding my real estate business with Century 21 Premier, committed to establishing a strong presence in the Middle Tennessee real estate community. I look forward to helping clients achieve their real estate goals while growing my career in this thriving market.

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